Sunday, March 27, 2011

I Just Have to Share This With You...

Easter is coming soon! I am so excited! It makes me think now of the theme for the writing contest I entered (unknown memories), and I wanted to share it with you. There is nothing more important or worth celebrating more than Jesus. I hope you are blessed in reading (and even more in believing)!
The End
It was the final week.  Life in the flesh as I had known it was coming to a close.  I had not been here before, but each scene that unfolded before me was hauntingly familiar.
I told my associates to get me a colt to ride upon. I knew where they could find it and I knew they would have no trouble acquiring it for me. It was mine, but I would return it. My associates did just as I told them. One person asked my associates what they thought they were doing, but retreated when they told them I had need of it.  Zechariah had said it would happen just as I am recounting it for you now.
My associates put their coats on the animal’s back and I sat down on it. Although the colt had never been ridden before, it yielded docilely to me.  Many people laid out palm branches and coats before me to ride upon as they shouted my praise. “Hosanna in the Highest!” they exclaimed.  Others were angry and said I should make them stop.  It was my world, and these were my people; the praise was justified. I did not, however, thrive on the praise of men; I only needed the approval of one.
I knew the praise would not last; people are fickle. I knew that I had to leave; I was going back to the place from which I had come. I was going back to the place where those memories were written when I had not yet lived even one of them.
Those who were angry with me sought my death vigorously.  I escaped them repeatedly, but the time was drawing near when I would surrender myself to them (how foolish they were to think they would capture me!) 
My closest allies had followed me loyally; they were with me even now, but they were asleep. My associates missed the urgency of the hour because what I was about to do was incomprehensible. 
In my flesh, I sweat great drops of blood; I knew what was coming and I sought another way. There was no other way. My world was broken, my people were broken. There were others too, that needed me. I wanted them. I wanted them all. I did not want to oppress them—although I certainly had the power to do so!
They were condemned people, destined for hell. The law was precise in defining right and wrong, and the penalty for doing wrong.  Not one of them was guiltless. I, on the other hand, was completely innocent.  I had the power to condemn them to the sentence they deserved. I also had the power to pay the debt they had incurred.  I set my face like flint to do the unthinkable, alone.
A heavily armed mob came for me in the dark of night. I had been praying while my associates slept. I woke them up and told them the time had come.  I faced the mob without resistance, but one of my closest allies, Peter, bless his heart, tried to defend me. He cut off one of the men’s ears.  I told Peter to put his sword away as I put the man’s ear back on his head. 
Later on that night, I watched as that same brave man, Peter, denied ever having known me.  Peter’s cowardice here did not provoke me to recoil any more than his earlier, nobler deed inspired me to continue toward my goal. I do not change like men and women. Everything I have ever done was based on who I am, not on what people thought or think of me. 
I was falsely accused, covertly arrested and unjustly tried at night.  My jailers felt free to mock me—beat me even, under the cloak of darkness. (Why do men think no one sees in the dark? Are not babies formed perfectly in the dark confines of their mothers’ wombs?) I knew exactly who they were and what they were doing—even when they blindfolded me.  I accepted the ridicule and the humiliation (though this was undeserved), just as I had accepted the praise. No one seemed to notice. (Do they notice even now?)
The sentence was passed, death by crucifixion. My enemies reveled in my defeat. My allies hid themselves from my distress.  None of them knew my impending doom would be my greatest victory. How could they?  “They pierced My hands and My feet; I can count all My bones. They look and stare at Me. They divide My garments among them, And for My clothing they cast lots.” How many years had it been since I read this Psalm of David? Hundreds I am sure. Now, I lived them. I breathed my last and it was finished; the debt was paid.
I was dead once, but now I live, never to die again. This too was written before; it is the sweetest of victories, both for me and all who trust me.

Friday, March 25, 2011

Something New!

I finally decided to do something new! I don't know why I did not do this in the first place! I will continue with my original community blog, since we are so close to the end of this class, but I just subscribed to a new place to see if I can get just a little more interaction. I do not yet know much about this site, but I read two articles I really liked. I will keep you posted...


http://www.faithwriters.com/corp-history.php

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Very Interesting...

I went onto my community blog today and found out that 24 people have read something I have written without one comment. I discovered someone else had 106 people view his or her writing with only three comments. This knowledge makes me feel much better about not having anyone respond to me, although it remains difficult to feel part of a community where there is little or no interaction. I still have not figured out how to tell how many people have viewed my contest entry, however, I will know something soon enough because today the voting starts! They broke the voting up into two groups of stories; I am in the second group. I am fine with this, I just don't know whose story to vote for! Though I have read a couple stories that I really like, I am partial to my own (do not know the protocol for voting on your own story:). I have a week to figure this out as voting closes on March 30. I discovered something else today. Under my sign-in name I have been given the designation "pencil pusher", and under that it says, "official member". I have no idea how or when I became an official member and how I got the designation of "pencil pusher".  It is strange to become an official member of a community when I have no idea how I accomplished this! Obladee, Oblada, life goes on La!... (must I site the Beatles for this?...)

Monday, March 21, 2011

I learned something new...

I went on the Writer's Beat today and learned that other writers feel neglected too! Some of them have been writing on this site far longer than me. Others had suggestions for them. I made a comment and asked some questions on how to implement some of the suggestions I had read. I also went on the "Free Writing" space. You can write for ten minutes there about "whatever". I initially hesitated about writing there because I don't think it's necessarily a good thing to utter all your heart (which I am sometimes prone to do!), especially if you're in a "mood".  I finally wrote there with caution and kind of enjoyed the experience. I hope to be able to look, maybe tomorrow or Wednesday, and see if there is a response there or not. Writers have said this is a place to garner comments on your writing rather than full critiques. Any sort of dialogue would give this site more of a community feel for me.

Monday, March 14, 2011

What Next?

I feel like I am in limbo on my community blog site! While the people there remain generally courteous, and the critique of fellow writers is both thought provoking and inspiring, I feel very out-of-place. Either I like something or I don't, and that opinion doesn't help anyone improve their writing (which is 1/2 my purpose for being there). I read other's criticisms and many times I can see the value of their input; I just don't think of those things myself. I am still reading and trying to give valid input, but I find it difficult. There are no comments on my contest entry and I will not find out about that until the 23rd of March. Given these circumstances, I am not quite sure what kind of an expert I will become, nor what I will have expertise in! I think I will try to get on two more times this week and write something in other areas on the site. There is one area that has a ten minute free write and edit. I wonder if it is cheating to write on this site what has already been rolling around in my head for several days...

Friday, March 4, 2011

Ready to Write!

I went on my community blog page today and noticed some things I had not paid much attention to before. Under my sign-in name, I am listed as a "new author". Other people have a designation under their names of "official member". I do not yet know how you get from one lable to the next. A week or two ago, I commented on some stories I read. Today, I found that one of the authors thanked me for my comment. Then I remembered reading somewhere that this community thinks highly of the amount of "thanks" you receive from others. It shows the community that you are making thoughtful comments in the interest of helping your fellow writers become better at their craft. It is also important for you to "thank" others. I like this idea and I am taking more notice of how people who have many "thanks" are responding. They really do take great care to encourage others, even if all their comments are not favorable. One person noted some very positive things about a fellow writer before sharing some confusion he had about another part of the writing. The author "thanked" him, and then explained why he had written what he did. This seems to me to be a very valuable exchange.

I also found a contest for prose. The contest initiators provide the theme and we provide the prose in 2000 words or less. The contestants are scored on grammar and mechanics as well as content and staying within the word limit. The theme is "unknown memories" and I plan to enter. I look forward to telling you how this goes...